Mevagissey twinkles illusive ‘cross the drowsy bay
The air is full of Brigadoon
And you were always only halfway here
But now you’ve gone, disappeared complete.
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finally a poetic poem! its beautiful and i love this style. 'A dusting of dawn sprinkles o’er the moon' and things like that......lovely. a poem is meant to paint a picture with words and make language beautiful. and that's exactly what youv'e done here. bravo!
Excelent poem You are a fine poet