Friday, February 21, 2014

Bereft Beggar Comments

Rating: 4.5

I beg you, Mom!
A piece of sandwich,
Baked in your kitchen oven
Not in some food factory.
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Suman Kumar Das
mom
COMMENTS
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 06 March 2014

Emotions crafted in a very delicate way........Suman............a nice poem with a nice message............... Please comment on my poem 'A date with destiny'

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Tadasha Tripathy 23 February 2014

I am in hostel from last five years.I can feel and understand the feelings deep from my heart.Very emotional poem.I liked reading it.

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Geetha Jayakumar 23 February 2014

A Moving write from your pen Suman..Very beautifully you have depicted the feelings of child who is deprived of love from his parents. Loved the way you presented it.

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Stan Petrovich 22 February 2014

There is a definite paucity of family life on PH. I suspect that, like me, many of us who are sensitive have been that way from a very early age, and crave some kind of surrogate family even if not ours. Everyone is the same, as you say, and all we need is love from a caring parent. Or used to. I am bereft of both parents now, but it was my mother's death when I was 13 that shaped my very life. Very moving poem.

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