Saturday, July 11, 2009

Bereft Comments

Rating: 5.0

“I want to be your oasis, ”
Those were your words to me
“Not strand you in a desert.”
But stranded you’ve left me,
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Adi Cox 11 July 2009

I can just see a skeleton in the sand here. A good example of the pain that can follow the once felt pleasure of a significant relationship. A poem that describes this condition well.10/10.

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