Monday, February 15, 2016

Bereft Comments

Rating: 0.0

now even the dog has gone by the door
that I left ajar as I have before

I heard it slam the wind blew a gust
...
Read full text

Barry Middleton
dog
COMMENTS
Margaret O Driscoll 23 February 2016

You have built up your strength and bolted your door, great poem Barry, love the moral of your story

3 0 Reply
Nosheen Irfan 16 February 2016

A sad poem on the loss of relations. And the ending is ironical. Now that the pantry is stocked, the door is locked. That's so true of life.

4 0 Reply
Barry Middleton 16 February 2016

People can and do take too much sometimes don't they.

0 0
Close
Error Success