Bereaved - Inspired By Mamtaji Comments

it is true what your verses are as grief is as if so sour in our life and with the loss of someone is sometimes so devastating.....nice write and a great provoking poem....10

'Life is cruel....yes And there is no remedy To dull the pain Or stop the tears! ' Beautiful poem... we can never fill the emptiness. Love it.

Fill the emptiness inside! Life is cruel....yes....................... .time still reasons to reason unrequited by cruelty life seems to trudge through joy and sorrow by inevitability............wonderful piece ingenious,10+++, thanks for sharing

plundered to read, emptiness and vacuum occupies the space....... bereaved the pain are to be suffered follow the steps of great saints...... joy or sorrow all are euqal....... but we are human being to live on the earth........ well written.....

Nice poem, you write so clearly and it is so readable. It flows along nicely, a very accessable poem.10/10

My cheeks are like hot frying pans......... tears reduce to salt in no time....... whether tears of joy or of pain, both taste salty......... the true content of all emotions........... i am that.... salt...mere salt...................

very very true...death is indeed cruel to the live...excellently expressed and written

grief and loss they say is taken care of by time. true to some extent, but i feel it just lies in our subconscious, and surfaces without notice.10 i am so glad I have discovered your poetry. Mamta