Saturday, February 9, 2008

Bent Comments

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Somewhere between where I am and should
be I find solace in what used to be. Naked
alone in the dark your smile is more than I
can stand. Scared of being put back
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David Blake
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Bill Smith 10 February 2008

enjoyed the read smiffy

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Alison Cassidy 10 February 2008

Your first line is superb. As is 'I no longer lament but still don't understand' The rest, though a little messy, gets your message across loud and clear. You share your vulnerability with originality and sensitivity. I'd like to read more. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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