Saturday, February 11, 2006
Benjamin And Joe Comments
Rating: ★4.5
Benjamin was full of sorrow
Benjamin was full of woe
for Benjamin had done the dirty
on his long term best friend Joe
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Scarborough Gypsy
12 February 2006
Hi Charles, Nice poem but needs some work on the mitre and rythm. It doesn't flow as well as it should. If you read it out allowed, you will see what I mean. Hope this helps. Kind regards Gyp's
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7/19/2025 4:45:54 AM # 1.0.0
This moved me greatly. The the poignant story, the careful, daring use of pronouns.......a very human experience.