Saturday, September 12, 2009

Beneath Your Sweet Lips Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beneath the warmth
So sweet, and hesitant
Of your passionate lips
Which softly bewitch me
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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali
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Maria Barbara Korynt 30 September 2009

Fine writing. Subtle and delicate. It enrapture... (10v.) Maria Barbara Korynt

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Dagmara Anna 20 September 2009

Written lightly and interestingly. I like it.

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Joseph Poewhit 12 September 2009

Captures a whole lot in a few words.

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