Wednesday, June 24, 2009

Beneath This Breathing Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0

Come my friend,
join me beneath this breathing tree,
and sit on the crispy grass,
smother yourself with its scene,
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Dr.subhendu Kar 12 July 2009

all the unsolved hectic of your life, are fugitive running in its own prison, ........wonder awes by gleams, beautiful write by imagery,10++, thanks for sharing

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Mimi Fakhira 06 July 2009

Keep on breathing... a work of art! ! Love the ending.

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Marieta Maglas 03 July 2009

''Don't worry my friend, all the unsolved hectic of your life, are fugitive running in its own prison, never to be free, never to be captured, '' wonderful poem...10++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 June 2009

Marvelous poem with nice idea/ending.

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