Tuesday, November 24, 2009

Beneath These Lines Comments

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Beneath these lines I could not rime like a poet
For my mind what hides
For words I can not say nor could I find in my own hands
While life’s going down in the blood bath sea
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Marieta Maglas 09 January 2010

nice visual metaphor While life’s going down in the blood bath sea nice reflective poem 10

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