Saturday, May 6, 2006

Beneath The Waves - Seychelles Islands Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beneath the surface of the blue, blue sea
Is a place I love to be,
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Terry Brewer
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Mary Nagy 08 May 2006

What a great poem! I love the line about being shark bait....that's how it would seem to me. Great images you've painted here. Wonderful work. Sincerely, Mary

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Con Nie 07 May 2006

Wow, amazing! Felt like I was on the journey in this one. That last verse was scary though. Good poem. Sincerely, Connie Webb

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R H 06 May 2006

A lovely visual write Terry, the view beneath the waves eloquently captured. Kind regards, Justine.

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Goldy Locks 06 May 2006

ahh i love snorkling & sea diving! you captured it most vividly. Sus.

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