Thursday, April 9, 2009

Beneath The Surface Comments

Rating: 3.5

I thought I saw a glimpse.
the tight knit chrysalis
in a diamond out of sight.
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sherrie tappenden
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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 20 April 2009

i love how u expressed ur feelings onto this poem.. eloquent and outstanding 100000+

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ata khan 19 April 2009

I really like the way you write Sherrie This poem is beautiful. Thanks for sharing

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Laurence Bourke 16 April 2009

the thing that drew me right into this wonderful write was the amazingly tangible word usage and choice placing. very very well done! ! ! such mystery and such depth is acquired only after careful and talented effort! fabulous write an easy 10.. keep it up! !

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Fay Slimm 14 April 2009

This is a superb write, and entraps much of the mystery surronding the so-called normal - - much food for thought and beautifully executed.... thank you Sherrie. 10 from Fay..

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