Beneath The Surface Comments

Deep feelings of anxiety insightfully expressed with clarity of thought and mind. A well texted me nicely thought out poem. Thanks for sharing.

I liked how you painted the mood!

I wish there was a lonely place Where I can run away from my mistakes ‘Cause I can no longer carry their weight This burden is so much more than I can take.... sadness, the weight.. that one feels and experiences.. anxiety and friendship and the desire to be loved and accepted...... thank you dear poet. tony

The message that you have penned here is so well crafted. I love this one, thank you for sharing this Nagy. - EN

A nice poetic imagination, Nagy. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

So sad....maybe that's the way of life it is...A beautiful write...a poignant yet loved the emotions being portrayed...thank you, Balint... I rate it 10. Cheryl