Beneath The Lamp.... Comments

Kafil, I'm searching for this lamp, but I haven't found it yet. It hasn't stopped me searching though... Frank

lovely poem.....the idea is harder said than done though well we can only try our best....right?

and give me that lamp.

A strange poem, though lovely. So linear, not like Kafil's other children. Wise words, wise indeed. Can you do it? no. Can we? no. In deeds we should improve not in words. no more 10++

A beautiful poem and an idea you put into it..Thanks for sharing :) A.

Sir Jon behind has already said what am supposed to say for this number of yours..congrats.10

a great write kafil 10

a good metaphor...well implied poem...great poem....

Very well written Kafil....really enjoyed this enlighting piece...well done 10

We can improve only when our ordinary lamp becomes an enlightened lamp. Good. What is enlightenment? Seeing the same situation from a higher level of perception. It will certainly offer a better solution.

Beneath us, the light to enlighten us. Interesting lines.