Sunday, June 26, 2011

Beneath The Grumbling Cesspit Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beneath the grumbling cesspit,
we interpret as a life
we hold out our hands
as a begging bowl
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David Harris
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 26 June 2011

Great poem. I was impressed. It was written well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A dream of the judgement day' on page 1. Best regards Akmal

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