Thursday, October 30, 2008

Beneath The Floor Comments

Rating: 2.8

Time to take a look, past the web and dust,
This life is all dimensions—forgotten
Lies take on the form of ghosts, without trust;
But there is the Thinker, thinking rotten
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Patti Masterman 14 July 2009

This is impressive writing which is both confounding (in the good way) and awesome. It's like one of those fearless-truth poems which seeks to find the nature of reality.

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Raj Arumugam 23 April 2009

Deep, thought-provoking poem..The imagery and the expression is astounding...

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