Thursday, March 30, 2017

Beneath The Feet Comments

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After decades of torments and struggles,
His bones cracked and wept heartily,
His legs disagreed throading on the harmless bottles,
And kept him indoor like a-day littlun of january.
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Joshua Adeyemi
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Dr Antony Theodore 28 March 2018

Under his comfort roof, oppressions seize his peace. The then lovely moment gave no more pleasure to him, taking the soul in disguise............ a good poem. you are trying to express in a very origingal ways. thank u dear poet. tony

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