Friday, January 11, 2013

Beneath The Dome Of Ancient Night Comments

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Beneath the dome of ancient night,
When owls awake, and poets write,
My lover sleeps, the sylvan child,
With flowers that are strange and wild.
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Sacha Hayes O'Grady
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Ray Quesada 11 January 2013

Excellent work! ! Seems you have a natural voice. The first 4 lines are my favorite, I give it a 9 out of 10.

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