Beneath the chestnut tree I lie
And gaze into the summer sky
And watch the clouds go floating by
Within the sea of blue.
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Well it certainly warms my heart to see a real poet of quality. This is a true poem and one of merit beyond that. The sentiment is expressed with grace and charm. Rare qualities. I salute your ability. I had not visited before to read your work. I had only noticed your name and mine together from time to time. It appears, we have much more in common. Greenwolfe 1962
Flawlessly metred...mellifluously smooth, crisp & tight.Stellar Work, indeed, Andrew ~FjR~ .2008.
Very much respect your discipline to write in aaab throughout. From my experience of being broken hearted over a woman, how i behaved, how i felt, this poem captured that. Very good work.
Just lovely Andrew. A beautifully flowing poem with wonderful contents and so pleasing to find. Great stuff. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Hi Andrew! ! I agree with Duncan, captivating and brilliant poem, love it! ! ! *10plus* Best wishes, ~ Friend Thad ~
The technical style of this one? .... 'Brilliant! ! ! ', The emotion? ...'Captured ' The vote? .....' A Ten' Love duncan X
What a tranquil write, I can see and feel the serenity within the walls of your pen... The flow is so heavenly peacefull as if the reader could read on and on.... Very nice I too, enjoy your writtings so much, that I think I have read most of them.... LOL.... Bonnie collins