Beneath The Aisle Comments

XOR 999 This is powerful and grabs one's attention by the throat! Marvelous lines with a great deal of power. I must go on to Part 2.

Thanks for your feedback - kinda lessens the soul ache :)

yaar this is real good stuff...... a 10.......

A malignant and benign writes.........crafted with poetic cheese.Well done Xor!

Thank you for your time and patience to read my poem.