Beneath That Smile Comments

He was always there and sometimes every where, of which he was proud Yet not one could see his pain, in everyone's world, he was just a part of the crowd! . A superb self portrayal that indicates inability to reach out to people with proper perspective, that fails to give them a feeling that the person/s is/are very special for you, Self realization is best education and now since you have realized shortcomings, corrective steps can definitely be taken to overcome them. Liked your style and frankness too. Thanks for sharing this thought provoking verse.10 points.