Tuesday, May 27, 2008

“beneath Stone Masonry” Comments

Rating: 4.5

Besmeared I see
Career and countenance
On the stony contours
Of her face
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Rehan Hyder
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Waqas Naeem 06 June 2008

Accept it Some colours get stronger When you rub them of That was an exceptional read...bravo!

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David Desantis 28 May 2008

some colors get stronger when you rub them off! ! I could picture that as quite the metaphor.

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Sadiqullah Khan 28 May 2008

stretching imagination from the colors of dunkins to butterflies and a local flavour, , , written with sound poetics

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If you penned this at a Dunkin' Donuts...What could you produce in the high-class enviorment of a STARBUCKS....a re-write of the illiad & Odyssea? Excellent versing...pristine structure....strong vernacular/lexicon...Solid as Mason-rock, Rehan! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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If you penned this at a Dunkin' Donuts...What could you produce in the high-class enviorment of a STARBUCKS....a re-write of the illiad & Odyssea? Excellent versing...pristine structure....strong vernacular/lexicon...Solid as Mason-rock, Rehan! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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