Friday, May 5, 2006

Beneath My Pillow Comments

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Beneath my pillow lay my fears.
Beneath my pillow lay my teeth.
Beneath my pillow is where I hide
when it is solace that I seek.
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Dan Brown
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Awwz danny... come out from under that pillow and face your fears... im sure you can after all these years... I love this poem... Great job Missy

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Goldy Locks 05 May 2006

good use of repetition.

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Newcastle-Upon-Tyne, UK
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