Saturday, December 22, 2007

Beneath Me Comments

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I wished that you would see me
in more than the usual way
Wished that you would see
underneath the paleness of my skin
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Old Teenage Poems
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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 September 2008

Love this nice composition.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 19 March 2008

beneath this writes is.................engraved with beauty.

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Amanduh Zallarrr 07 January 2008

i really like this piece. : ] keep writing. ~frozenbeauty

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