Friday, May 26, 2006

Beneath Delicate Feet Comments

Rating: 5.0

The fear is terrible
And my heart is weak
When I see you distressed
Or painfully displeased
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Uriah Hamilton
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Duncan Wyllie 31 May 2006

The Hauntingly sad yet beautiful 'Beneath Delicate Feet' will have all the elements of a favourite of mine This is exceptional! Love Duncan X

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Amberlee Carter 30 May 2006

I am happy when I'm unhappy, that's my comfort zone...strange isn't it?

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Ronald Stroman 26 May 2006

unhappiness likes company... too. i like to blend my happiness into the happiness of another. everytime i find myself in the presence of unhappiness, i excuse mysef... before i'm affected & infected. 'cause if i'm feeling poetically well, ain't no need to mess up everything good; i'm poetically feelin'. i hope u r poetically happy 4 the rest of your poetic life.

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***** ********* 26 May 2006

Happiness Uriah, does not come compacted, it comes in tiny morsels such as this lament to worshipping from afar. What I love about writing on the net is, I feel so close, just a click away from the minds of my friends and the odd lover! lol Grinning at you. Love the poem. Love in the moment. Tai

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