Beneath A Copper-Tint Sky Comments

so phenomenally beautiful hunter! did you ever write you book of poems? I am at laclairen@yahoo.com and want to know so I can buy...lover of Theodore Roethke, Dylan Thomas, and poems of Hunter Dasten!

so phenomenal Hunter, so magically beautiful!

REALLY ENJOYED THIS, YOU CAUGHT THE MOMENT AND ATMOSPHERE SO WELL.Nothing like being in the presence of that special someone who makes your world rock, sharing the moment.

Simply Beautiful Hunter. Will be looking for more. Excellent piece. Regards. Craig.

Artfully done and well crafted, as all poems should do, yours tell an amazing story that flows effortlessly with every word. Each unique but always at the right spot! Well played, Good Job!

Words can not express how wonderful this poem is. Once again the descriptions were amazing. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.10++

>.< you are amazing i love how beauituflly descriptive your poems are, makes me feel like the summer is here

Quite honestly, this poem is splendid. The imagery you use; the shores, the beige sand, this imagery serves to lead the reader right to the essence of the poem. That's the gift of poetry - the use of imagery as pathways to a greater essence within the poem itself. And what is even more remarkable is your precision. I did not feel lost as I do in the poems of some other authors I've read.

This is an awesome poem! ! I am a fan of free verse and this is a wonderfully written poem, but I also like to read all types of poetry although I find it hard to stick to a certain form of any kind when writing poetry! ! Thanks for inviting me to read! !

amazing poem obviously well thought out, and incredible detail keep writing :)

Hi Hunter, Although not a fan of freeform verse, your poem is very descriptive, and allows me to walk with you along that sand. However, you should try to work within the disciplines of rhyme and metre, and you may find that what is merely good, suddenly becomes rather awesome. David.

This poem is wonderful!

wow, this is is completely beautiful <3 10

Very awesome poem it's very touching

An amazing poem. Beautifully written.10+

Oh my God dude this it magnificient.! It is an exact masterpiece.! Great imagery... I hope I could write as professi0nal as you! 10+++

'a verse so delicate that the words could hardly bridge the gap between us': That line is as good as it (poetry) gets! You are generous in your elation also-you wonder if the hardworking sailors are lucky enough to have a love like yours in their lives. It's a great love poem with a wonderfully colourful background.

What a great way to awaken to LIFE :)

This is excellent writting and seems to emit a night of joy as your words allow the reader to be there. Great write I give you a 10

You're precious! Someone with a mind already younger than I. True delight of an intelligent mind sets fire to my passion!