Wednesday, July 15, 2009

Benchwarmer (Getting Benched Again) Comments

Rating: 0.0

My nose is bloody, my knuckles, too,
And my jersey's covered in mud.
I don't know who I thought I was kidding,
Trying to be some romantic stud.
...
Read full text

Aidan Clevinger
COMMENTS
I Am Charlie 08 August 2009

Grin...I like it. the image that pops up...it's a good one alright. like your analogy. Suits the topic down to the ground. although, id reword 'my feet feel made of lead'. and the 'out' that's spelt 'our' when she steals off with the ball.

0 0 Reply
Natalie Lewis 22 July 2009

OH Aidan I adore this! ! ! So fabulously clever! ! ! You poor boy!

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success