Friday, February 13, 2009

Bench Comments

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There is a bench
At the park
That’s been there for a while
If it could tell stories
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Carlos Cardona
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Ravi A 17 February 2009

fine work imbibing the spirit of the scene in the reader. Yes, a bench too has its story to tell the passersby. For that matter, all elements in the Nature share their very stories- these stars, monuments, fallen leaf, river, mountains and what not? If you are able to see the stories of others and bygone civilizations in these elements and pen them, then, those poems will be everlasting and widely read. I am sure. You may go through my poetry and feel for yourself the spirit of what I am aiming at. Best of luck.

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