Saturday, July 21, 2007

Bemused Comments

Rating: 5.0

I feel the warmth rise
As I stir the burning embers
Feeling you near though you are far from my vision
The eyes of my heart see you clearly
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Patricia Gale
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Sarwar Chowdhury 31 August 2009

Outstanding description outstanding imageries! 10+

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P, this enthralled me. It is quite simply beautifully written. t x

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Lee Degnan 21 July 2007

Very musical and dreamy... entrancing like the flames in your poem I love how the light and the sounds from the fire heighten the feelings in the poem Great job... Hugs, Lee

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