Saturday, November 7, 2009

Below The Waves Comments

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Below the waves:
I thought I was above
The surface,
But now I am
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Will Barber
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Luis Gil 09 December 2009

'Below the waves' seems like a good place. Let others fight for the surface. Take care, Will.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 16 November 2009

Realistic poem I grabbed wholeheartedly, it seems the death is better than dying? Thank you so much for your valuable comment on 'Samsara'.

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