Thursday, August 30, 2018

Below The Ocean Floor Comments

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Below the ocean floor

I see another world below the ocean floor
Where peace reigns forever more.
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Practicing Poetess 02 September 2018

Sounds like Utopia, except underwater! And politicians did not exist- - well, not the crooked ones, anyway! Hopefully, we can do more than dream of possibilities- - we can go about quietly affecting change, as the opportunity presents itself. Who knows how much difference even a poem such as this can make? Well-written!

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Captain Cur 31 August 2018

Ah! The one two punch! Below the ocean floor lies honesty and truth. A great write Louis, let us all work in our own ways for a more productive and helpful life, to share with our families, friends and all those in need.

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Louis Rams 31 August 2018

it is beautiful when we can dream of possibilities

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 August 2018

Such a splendid write, Louis.......................................

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Louis Rams 31 August 2018

thank you so much for viewing and commenting

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