Beloved alone on a distant land
With the fires and cries all around
Enemies with their daggers drawn
Friends and foes unidentified
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Very sad, even gloomy. Just a bit of love, and it could have been a different picture. Love brings piece and hope. Strong imagery. Powerful message. Poem finely set.
You've got sad poems too, haven't you? I like your poem. Be happy. Thank you.