Friday, July 10, 2015

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I am coming handsome,
To know as to why sweetheart loves you so much,
To learn the art of beatification,
Beautification of body,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 April 2018

Just too simple and beautiful.... it's not looks that matter but in the long run inner grace is what sets in life one's place and face and in the annals of time leaves an everlasting trace so be thy grace say ameen or amen both mean the same

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Seema Chowdhury 16 November 2015

nice closing line, it makes you pause and think for a moment.

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Hazel Durham 20 July 2015

Beautification of heart, soul and mind to cleanse our sins and walk in the knowledge we are emotionally free of any negativity! Great write!

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Valsa George 14 July 2015

So you are on a beautification therapy....! Wish you all success..! The older we grow, greater should be the efforts at beautification! Delightful read!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 July 2015

I have learnt the art of stretching my hands for a sacrifice, I have learnt the art of peace from one sitting under a tree, Now I am coming to learn the practicality of life, Without that my leaning will remain incomplete, ......true said.Constructive depiction. Many thanks dear sir, may God strengthen your insight.. .....10

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