Beloved Mothers Poem by adheez van der beanthz

Beloved Mothers

Rating: 4.1


God creates magmas
Eternal flames
That carved Terra’s face

God creates springs
That gather in the ocean
Despite take a long tiring journey

God creates rainbow and auroras
Jewelry of the skies
Where beauty always live

Then God summarize it
Present a breath of life
Endue a piece of soul
And entrust a form of mandate

To the most glorious creature
To the real angel in the world
To her..
Beloved mothers

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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I dedicate this poem to all mothers around the world
They are the real angel that God sent to us
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendran Muthiah 13 October 2013

The word mother itself brings tears from my eyes. Well done.

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 September 2013

A beautiful description on mothers around the world.. Very well portrayed. Loved it.

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Danny Draper 16 September 2013

A fine dedication to mothers.

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Antonio Liao 13 September 2013

a great style of writing makes this poem, very reflected... an avenue of inner sanctum of freedom to galloping the passion of what is a BEING....

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Shahzia Batool 28 August 2013

beautifully brought to this culmination...and a perfect dedication to the mothers...

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Bing Hua 20 March 2015

Thanks God from my deep heart!

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Antonio Liao 21 May 2014

so lovely to touch for every words that utter the silent feature of droplets lines, the lasting voice of eternity lives in your poem on what is a mother....thank you and God bless a 10/10

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Noreen Carden 29 December 2013

A lovely tribute to mothers beautifully written adheez

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 21 December 2013

A nice attribute for mother. You made such a lovely poem indeed. Mother is made from all the best and beautiful things. Blessed all mother in the world. Happy mother day

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Gary H 21 December 2013

My mom would be crying right now, nice work for sure.

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