Beloved King Comments

Only in the King of Kings, Jesus Christ, do I find hope amidst this chaotic world... Another thought provoking piece.

This is pure sarcasm and the poem is filled with anger. I am not saying that those are bad things but...there is no other feeling in the poem and it is not enjoyable to read. The word choice is very interesting though and the beggining to each section is very well togethor. This is a rather hard poem to comment on, so i appolagize for the fact that i am not giving much advice on how to improve. In the end I don't like this poem but that does not make it a bad poem, if i had to rate it it be a 8.1/ 10.

Good poem wit a lot of study on the present situation....

excellent description on growing society and also tells how we have attached to it10

an excellent piece of satire

Well written piece of poetry. The criticism is put in a cynical but still pleasant way.