If I could see behind your smile,
Would I see the broken soul inside
And stay there with you for a while,
Or would that hurt your pride.
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Excellently penned piece...emotion drips off the page with this fine poem. keep'm coming Martine...10 best wishes Jon
Wow! This is a stick of dynamite! A superbly written poem and a true work of art! Poem possesses deep emotion and powerful imagery! Keep sharing!
When reading this poet's work, I really feel great pennant.. we never miss this deep debut of emotions filled with a new rhythm When near that old young brook We were sitting, filled by the sounds Of our illusions in the sea, caught by the hook We sent out on his own to bounce And dance on the water’s surface so proud.
Hi Martine---a luvli person's emotions boils over to create feelings and this poem is just that, full of it, and if there was only nine numbers I'd give it ten, kind regards Ken e Hall