Friday, October 27, 2006

Beloved Artist Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I could see behind your smile,
Would I see the broken soul inside
And stay there with you for a while,
Or would that hurt your pride.
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Martine Kolber
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Ken E Hall 09 November 2008

Hi Martine---a luvli person's emotions boils over to create feelings and this poem is just that, full of it, and if there was only nine numbers I'd give it ten, kind regards Ken e Hall

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~ Jon London ~ 27 June 2008

Excellently penned piece...emotion drips off the page with this fine poem. keep'm coming Martine...10 best wishes Jon

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Misty Talbot 26 December 2006

I really enjoyed ready this. Keep writting! ! ! !

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Gregory Golden 15 December 2006

Wow! This is a stick of dynamite! A superbly written poem and a true work of art! Poem possesses deep emotion and powerful imagery! Keep sharing!

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Kee Thampi 30 October 2006

When reading this poet's work, I really feel great pennant.. we never miss this deep debut of emotions filled with a new rhythm When near that old young brook We were sitting, filled by the sounds Of our illusions in the sea, caught by the hook We sent out on his own to bounce And dance on the water’s surface so proud.

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Martine Kolber

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