Monday, May 25, 2015

Beloved And The Betrayed Comments

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Sinking to a very deep....
so far from the sweet memories
Heart redeems no weep
And mind redeems no worries.!
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Ishrat khan
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Rajnish Manga 18 April 2020

Voyaging alone.... Millions of tears rained with many reason.... throughout all the seasons.... //.... A series of thoughts and images held together on a delicate thread of sadness. Thanks a lot.

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Abhishek Singh 31 March 2019

Very well penned poem.

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Ayan Ali Dar 22 March 2017

amazing expirenced every word of yours

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M Asim Nehal 16 September 2015

Awesome poem.............I enjoyed it. I invite you to read my poems...

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Ruhffa Ruhffa 25 May 2015

well said, .. beloved and betrayed..nicely written, , do keep writting and do check out my poem freedom in surrender

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Fabrizio Frosini 25 May 2015

43 esclamation marks.. May I tell you, Israth? don't use them.. there is no need.. thanks for sharing your poetry greetings from Italy

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