Beloved (3rd Attempt At A Love Poem) Comments

Very nice. I enjoyed reading it. (:

Oh...I never made it this far but I see you changed your tune. Hey you know what they say, if at first you don't succeed, then give up on love and stick to reality. I like the undertones here.

amazing poem, it's a poem filled with something that is just you, it's amazing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !