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Wendy Bureau, telling lies - I suppose they are lies because she conjectures about her situation, when the fact is, what she is saying, appears to truely be her situation and that is ok, when we talk to ourselves. Robert Burns, Portland, Oregon

A beautiful love poem well written in a mature diction redefining the love......10/10.

a love poem on love...gives excellent pleasing reading, Wendy...stanzas cascading there, on repeated word 'suppose' 10

A marvellously written piece in the true classical style. Top marks my friend. Best wishes, Andrew x

You certainly have a way with words Wendy, i love that last line, i love the whole poem, regards Bob