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a master piece indeed... its just fantastic mam..... the lines with forms rhyme were saw your smile then and my poems became reality We spoke about cities, countries, humanity with a tint of love at first sight... well written mam..

Poetry at its refreshing best.

Ahhh this is so touching, so beautiful....... Ruthy

love transcends..... beautifulllllllllll 10 votes

I can sense a sincere and pure love and admiration in these words. A moving piece. Keep smiling and keep writing, Robert

Its said - 'He who is in love is wise and is becoming wiser, Sees newly every time he looks at the object beloved, Drawing from it with his eyes and his mind Those virtues it possesses' Yes this is the yearn of every human... Else what's so special in being human...? ? You have touched my heart.

Fine work Rani! Loving and tender

i'm simply touched of your finest touches...............good job

The last stanza really pulled this together beautifully, My favourite part: They even said you played soft chords On your guitar on moonless nights Thankyou for sharing it Love duncan X

Gentle and captivating expression. Simply superb. To read your free flowing verse is greatly refreshing.

simply beautifulpiece of poetic prose

so heartfelt love poem, thanks for sharing