Above the space
Among countless stars
The moon was rising
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A Very good poem with such a broad scope. But the am is not necessary. Perhaps it could read: I felt That I belonged To the universe As do stars And the moon. Enjoyed Adeline
Feeling a part of the universe, belonging to something bigger than life itself. A great poem, loved it! Thank you, RoseAnn
Feeling a part of the universe, belonging to something bigger than life. A great poem, loved it! Thank you, RoseAnn
I am a a part of the universe, I belong to something bigger than life. they are great themes.. especially the thought something bigger than life. this is a point to meditate. A great poem, loved it! Thank you, tony
Thanks dear tony