Belonging Comments

A line leads me to be written in comment from memory: STRONGEST MAN IS HE WHO CAN STAND ALONE Your last stanza perhaps illustrates this individual strongness. Excellent poem you have written just of the time. So many chords of our psychological problems reflecting through this writing. Along with the sheeps and shephered also present here. Thank you. Better to think oneself as a son of man than that of a lamb. Write more poet.....more you write but of course not with the mechanical urge. Regards, 10+ Apoet Bangla

i appreciate the contents, the style of the poem, sequence of thought. salute marks 10 pl read my 'the concept of the soul' shan

A thin line between belonging and being own, property and only a small difference between apart (of something) and an imposter. Think for yourself, Lead yourself. That's what I'm seeing from this poem and I like it.