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I am a mere
Butterfly
Flitting
Across
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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi
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Terry Craddock 11 April 2016

Wow I am really smiling now :) I had read this several times before I noticed the mention above. I love especially the images, images I love also, several I have used with love and adoration. Butterflies I used in several poems but your lines 'I am a mere Butterfly Flitting Across The floral Wilds Stealing their hues Borrowing dyes' this I adored :) flitting across/ floral wilds/ stealing their hues/ borrowing dyes (sparkles in my mind) all your lines resonate in my mind a bubble/ Containing My storms/ Reflecting/ The rainbows/ That arches/ The dawns (rages in smiles within mind song) Migratory bird/ Of the seven Seas/ Across/ the oceans/ I travel/ Born Free (I have been several species of migratory bird on wing upon long journeys, swallows, the albatross; even when stationary the hawk, the eagle, upon wing in breeze wind thermals or the kingfisher fishing.) Scent of/ wet earth/ Thunder/ of rain clouds/ Gypsy/ From desert/ I live for/ Treacherous/ Routes (stanza after stanza you have written strong images of all I love in love, nature still and in contrasts; wet earth and thunderstorms, stanza after stanza you have written my soul. I have scenes of landscape thunderstorms upon my lounge walls, I should send you some :) 10+++ ++ :)

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I cannot thank you enough for all the encouragement!

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