Saturday, April 19, 2008

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Dark as my world may seem
I roam through a world of dreams
Through the kisses of the misty winds
And all the places my tears has been
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janice etienne
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James Jason Dye 26 October 2008

Nice poem. Belief is one of the most important things. Always wonder before you doubt. However there are some grammatical and spelling errors but I thought them cute and innocent.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 10 September 2008

Hello Janice and it is great to have faith and be able to believe. A good read. Loyd

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DELETED NOW 23 April 2008

tis is like when u believe in something and ppl believe in another and that makes u believe in that so u feel like just saying I always going to believe in this! but then later u totally change ur mind and it's like good thing I didn't say that

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Michael Pruchnicki 19 April 2008

Echoes in one's head are the makings of a good poet! You make your soul shine with rays of gold from your own sun! That place where you may believe is within! Regards, Michael

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