Sunday, February 9, 2014
Believing In Wonder Comments
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Innocence set upon a child's face, smiling with pure
joy at the newness of everything.
Investigating sights and sounds, believing in the
wonder all around them.
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8/3/2025 11:18:14 AM # 1.0.0
The poem is fine but I can't help but feel it is half finished. There is no sing to the words, no natural internal rhythm that might make the reading a joy. I feel you need to pick up on the highs and the lows to achieve what is required. And that will come by reading more poetry and thinking about it. In My Opinion. Best wishes