Tuesday, January 21, 2020

Believed In Myself Comments

Rating: 4.4

On the streets I was hanging.
I tried to picture one thing,
Thing of my future ambition.
In my world there was no tension.
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Abubakar Mohammed Musa
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Chinedu Dike 30 January 2020

A heartrending narrative piece of poetry written with clarity of thought and mind. Powerfully and movingly penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing, Abubakar.

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 January 2020

Dear Lord, please forgive me, Though they stole the sins of me. There is no heaven to them not me. I'm a vagabond but a fixture not slimy..../// excellent introspective poem penned; but there is no sad in the introspective light; delightful munificence there works as the eternal happiness if the self knows the self truely!

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Kingsley Egbukole 21 January 2020

Extricating yourself from oppression, dominance and living your own life and taking full charge of your destiny. Beautiful poem...10

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 January 2020

I'm a vagabond but a fixture not slimy. I'm full of tantrums, clemency lacks in me. Contemplation, paradise them, me. I believe in myself.. very good poem. tony

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