Tuesday, November 25, 2008

Believe Poem Comments

Rating: 2.8

My belief is to follow the stars and moon
and i believe my soul will go there soon
because i rise above this
and make life what it is
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brittney vincelette
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Karla Bardanza 25 November 2008

Hi Dear! Great poem! I luv it! Karla Bardanza

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Frank Simon 25 November 2008

Robin, This is a great poem of belief what one wishes for in the hereafter. Keep pushin' the pen from what comes within. Just a note Robin, the 2nd last line could read better as 'have' instead of 'half'. Have a good one- great write Robin! Frank

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