Believe Me Comments

awesome composition

Re: Believe me (Score: 1) by ladymaybebaby on Sunday, August 12,2012 (17: 28: 44) Hi, I wanted to point out a couple of things first. The rhyming was on again/off again. You need to stick to one thing and follow it all the way through, if not it's a huge distraction to the reader. Your message is delivered loud and clear, yet a wonder did the rhyming hold you back a bit? Maybe a narrative style would give you more freedom without having to concern your self with rhymes. You can just pour out your message with out any barriers. Just a thought. It is nice to read something enlightening for a change. -LMB xoxo

Believe me Faith is totally free No binding Yet ever confiding