Saturday, January 9, 2016

Believe It Or Not Comments

Rating: 5.0

Believe it or not but He came in my dreams,
I was a child and I was always told,
do it, it's good and God likes it,
don't do that, God dislikes that,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Abderrahmane Dakir 11 January 2016

Thank you for sharing this lovely relationship with your grandfather.

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Nosheen Irfan 11 January 2016

Such a beautiful write. Brings out the beauty of child and grandfather's relation. You truly understand the nuances of life to write on every topic.10

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Valsa George 10 January 2016

This is such a lovely poem. Though fictional, I enjoyed reading it! So you were so naughty even as a child! A 10

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Khalida Bano Ali 10 January 2016

What a different tribute, an amazing poem.

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Kelly Kurt 09 January 2016

My dear friend, Akhtar, I love you! I truly do! No one can take that away from me. No one can diminish the love you have for your grandfather. I can offer no correlations but still value the impact you have on my thought. Will a simple thanks suffice? I hope so, as that is all I can offer. Peace and happiness my brother.

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