Friday, January 23, 2009

**believe It Or Not...** Comments

Rating: 2.6

I've written this today.. last 5 mins of school, something rushed into mind.. my thoughts of her...

Maybe its the way you can somehow make me survive the toughest days.
Maybe its the way your words reach into my heart.
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Dislocated Heart
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Audrey Marie Kay 07 February 2009

This is so dreamy and love filled. I really like it =)

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Kite Remedy 01 February 2009

what a heartfelt poem, you've written what your heart tell you to. that makes your poem felt personal..

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Leslie Ching 01 February 2009

aw...this is so sweet...i hope she knows how you feel...10+

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Shilesha Johnson 26 January 2009

wow that was just beautiful. i loved that poem from start to finish. i could relate to it so well and im going through something like that and that's something i wish i could say. great job! !

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